Looks really promising, reminds me of motorstorm pacific rift map ;) I think it needs a focal point, the boat could be a good focal point but needs more details? Perhaps the image could be broken up by some silhouetted figues in the immediate foreground, could be usefull storyteller to expain who and why people have come here? Hope this was any help :)
Thanks man, I've actually just started playing Pacific Rift so I guess it rubbed off on me! I agree this piece needs more, hopefully gonna go back to it in the future and add some more stuff. Love your work!